I might suggest a little narrower kerning between the words "GOOD DEER," and also between the words "GO TO," but I can see why you didn't want too great a contrast between the middle lines and the top/bottom ones.
Hmm. Slightly wider kern between the letters of those two lines, and a little less in the center of those lines?
You might be right my friend, the thing is that the letters are handwritten and it kinda felt right how i put them.. Thank you so much for taking the time to give such a great and to the point feedback!!